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3 Overused Character Traits to Avoid

March 26, 2015 By: Jason Bougger

You're supposed to create interesting, flawed characters with compelling back-stories. The last thing you want is for a rejection letter to tell you that you have flat, dull characters.I know. You’re supposed to create interesting, flawed characters with compelling back-stories. The last thing you want is for a rejection letter to tell you that you have flat, dull characters.

So what do you do? Like all good writers, you try to make your characters deeper by giving them some interesting baggage from their pasts. Or you rewrite their dialog to make it a little more edgier, a little more witty.

But what about when this goes wrong? What about when the traits or back-story you pick actually harm your characters instead of enhancing them?

Here are three examples of what you shouldn’t do; three ways to turn your dull characters into generic ones.

1. The Victim

How about a character who was abused in the past? That hasn’t been done more than a few million times, right? The worst are when the character has been a victim of domestic violence or sexual abuse. Topics like that are far too disturbing for me to write about and even worse to read about. And they’re done to death. Just watch any movies made for the Lifetime Cable network.

If you do feel the need to give your character the back-story of being a victim, make it relevant to your overall storyline, don’t just insert it with hopes to make your character “more interesting”.

2. The Addict

Here’s one I fall back on to far too often. Looking back, I think I can say that something like 90% of the main characters in my fiction have drinking problems and a nicotine habit. I think it’s something I picked up from reading too many Stephen King books when I was a kid.

If you are in desperate need of a character flaw, there are plenty of options other than drugs and alcohol.  Try road rage, overeating, gossiping, cannibalism. Anything. Just stop making them drink so much.

3. The Juno

This is the worst. You’ve got a Young Adult novel with a female lead. That means she needs to be snarky, intelligent, anti-authority, and sarcastic, right? Wrong. For the love of God, wrong. Everyone has seen Juno, and everyone hates it. Or at least they should. The last thing the YA world needs are more novels that read like Juno. So if you’re writing that awful movie in book form, stop it. Stop it right now.

These are only three example, but there are dozens more out there, so it’s up to you to figure them out.

It’s important to make your characters original. Make them flawed and realistic. And make sure their flaws and character traits aren’t generic either.

What other generic character flaws am I missing? Leave a comment!

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About Jason Bougger

Jason Bougger is a writer and blogger who lives in Omaha, Nebraska with his ever-growing family. His YA novel, Holy Fudgesicles, was published this year by Wings ePress and he has had over twenty short stories published in various print and online markets. In addition to his own writing, he is the owner and editor of Theme of Absence, an online magazine of fantasy, horror, and science fiction.

Comments

  1. Elisa says

    December 23, 2017 at 4:14 pm

    You should read about the STORY of literature and stop influencing people to go towards literary regression, the third topic is simply gross. You clearly don’t see literature as a form of self expression, as an art, for you it only means money.

    • Jason Bougger says

      January 28, 2018 at 4:05 pm

      If you think writing means money for me, you clearly haven’t seen my tax return.

      As for your comments, however, I think I’m doing quite the opposite of what you’re saying I do. The fact that so many authors and screenwriters rely on the very stereotypes I bring up in this post, shows that they are lazy and unimaginative. I’d say that trends toward “literary regression” more than anything else.

      Either way, I respect your view, and want to thank you for taking the time to comment.

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